Alterations for Pony Boot Camp (III)

Once again I felt the need for firing up my alteration machine. As always, the storyline itself is not affected.

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Part II:

I never had much sense for nature – I like boutiques, sushi bars and record stores.

is changed into:

I never had much sense for nature – I like boutiques, sushi bars and old-fashioned record shops.

All record shops I came across lately seemed to be a bit old-fashioned, maybe because of the revival (or persistence) of vinyl.

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Part XXXIII:

The already big article on the front page was expanded by a huge coverage on page three, titled “Burning Bright” and leaving little doubt behind that taking side with troubled young adults wasn’t politically opportune at the moment.

has a part added:

The already big article on the front page was expanded by a huge coverage on page three, titled “Burning Bright”, having nothing to do with tygers and leaving little doubt behind that taking side with troubled young adults wasn’t politically opportune at the moment.

Just to hammer the William Blake reference home…

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One response to “Alterations for Pony Boot Camp (III)

  • Vandalay

    “Hammer the reference home…” Clever, also from the poem…Nice. So the US elects a TV reality show host who s a pathological bullying narcissist, misogynist and racist man-child… That ought to work out well.

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